NaNoWriMo. Don’t worry. It’ll be over soon. 36,000 words.

In my manuscript – I’ll call it that – I now have as many questions as I have definitive decisions.

The character watched the character – from how far away? – she knows he is there – how can she tell? – how far into his watching of her does she first begin to know? – does she finally see the bushes over there moving?  – over where?

What does he see?  What is in the way of his vision?

Where has he come from?  Why?  He knows she won’t . . . and so he . . .

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